Ok, since being one of the first people to write in the comments is daunting. I'll give my answer to each of these questions. And I really hope that y'all can gather the courage to comment today, or any day, as well. 1. Well, since I'm the writer, yes, I loved the writing style. 2. Personally, even though these points are all things I already know, having them written out and thinking over them was very beneficial to me. 3. Umm, I read in sync with the music every time... I'd read it so many times by the end that I could listen to one of those songs and be done with it at the same time. Can you get to that point? If so that means you've read it so many times that you've gathered everything you can from the post. And I don't mean just skim read it, I mean read every word. 4. I of course found this to be hilarious, but then, I'm a big fan of Brandon Sanderson. 5. Zero times, I refuse to be bored by my own writing. If I am, then it's not good and needs to be rewritten. Hopefully y'all didn't find this boring. If you did let me know why and how I can fix it. 6. Well, I knew all this beforehand, how else could I have written it, but it will still be helpful. Thank you for your patience.
1. Use paragraphs to your benefit. I scrolled to the end myself because all I saw were long, run-on blocks of text. I didn't want to read that. White space is your friend.
2. Perhaps edit for conciseness in the future. What you attempted to say could have been said in a lot fewer words.
Of course! Thanks for the tips. Yeah, I thought they might be too long, but because it was my first post on here wasn't sure how the formatting worked. I should've edited it for conciseness, unfortunately I was rushing a little and didn't have the time to go through and edit out extra sentences. I'll definitely keep these things in mind for future posts. I'm sorry that because it's all long blocks of text you didn't want to read it, I did want a longer post this time, because we haven't posted in a little while, but didn't mean to scare away readers. That's actually why I put the songs into it, I thought it might help people to stay focused.
I loved this thank you so much Ken!!! I love how you weave humor into your writing, it made me want to actually read the whole thing!!! XD
I'm so glad you liked it Leah!
Ok, since being one of the first people to write in the comments is daunting. I'll give my answer to each of these questions. And I really hope that y'all can gather the courage to comment today, or any day, as well. 1. Well, since I'm the writer, yes, I loved the writing style. 2. Personally, even though these points are all things I already know, having them written out and thinking over them was very beneficial to me. 3. Umm, I read in sync with the music every time... I'd read it so many times by the end that I could listen to one of those songs and be done with it at the same time. Can you get to that point? If so that means you've read it so many times that you've gathered everything you can from the post. And I don't mean just skim read it, I mean read every word. 4. I of course found this to be hilarious, but then, I'm a big fan of Brandon Sanderson. 5. Zero times, I refuse to be bored by my own writing. If I am, then it's not good and needs to be rewritten. Hopefully y'all didn't find this boring. If you did let me know why and how I can fix it. 6. Well, I knew all this beforehand, how else could I have written it, but it will still be helpful. Thank you for your patience.
A few tips of my own...
1. Use paragraphs to your benefit. I scrolled to the end myself because all I saw were long, run-on blocks of text. I didn't want to read that. White space is your friend.
2. Perhaps edit for conciseness in the future. What you attempted to say could have been said in a lot fewer words.
Of course! Thanks for the tips. Yeah, I thought they might be too long, but because it was my first post on here wasn't sure how the formatting worked. I should've edited it for conciseness, unfortunately I was rushing a little and didn't have the time to go through and edit out extra sentences. I'll definitely keep these things in mind for future posts. I'm sorry that because it's all long blocks of text you didn't want to read it, I did want a longer post this time, because we haven't posted in a little while, but didn't mean to scare away readers. That's actually why I put the songs into it, I thought it might help people to stay focused.
Thanks so much for this Ken!! Lovely post and even lovelier writing style ;) (your humor always gets me XD)
Of course! Glad you liked it. (That is what humor is supposed to do, yes?) xD